The writing just kept flowing and I did a couple more pages in the first chapter (or Interlude) of When God’s Do Meddle. I hope you read the excerpt below and leave me some feedback! I am excited to hear your thoughts.

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Writing Length: 25 Minutes
Word Count: 957

Writing Excerpt
The general indicated another bay that was approximately a quarter of the way around, east, the outside of the continent. “Blood Moon Bay, the entirety of which is Ymir’Atan, capital city of the Night Elves, the oldest and perhaps greatest of Ymiron’s servants. Twin fortress guard the mouth and any landing would be right into the heart of the city. Fine as my army, it would be slaughter to attack there, if we could even get our fleet there. Blood Moon Bay opens into the Tortured Islands and the Storm Seas which surround them. Only those with favor of the God of the Seas could even home to move through there in force, and though he is known to be fickle, he has never been a friend to the God of Night. That same protection prevents the Night Elves, or any of Ymiron’s other armies from sailing from there. I have squadrons nearby to ensure that any lone ships attempting the voyage are captured once they leave the Storm Seas.”

He then indicated a bay, by far the largest of the three, laying approximately right across the continent from them. “The Bay of Icy Stars has been frozen over for time out of mind. One could, I suppose, risk the Ice Floes and land an army with appropriate transportation at the edge of the ice, but it is a long and punishingly cold journey to anyplace we could possibly setup a permanent camp, supplies would rapidly become a problem from the distance and lack of food to forage, as would another of the Night God’s servants, the Ice Trolls. They are few in number, so far as we known, but they are formidable opponents and can live and move freely on the Ice. Occasionally, our histories tell us, they would launch small raids from there, but bigger and full invasions armies would be impossible, and I have squadrons in the area as well, hoping to catch any such raids.

I hope that you all have a wonderful day, get the chance to do or experience something creative, and I’ll catch you on the next one!

– Jon


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